Loved the dynamics in this - the writing of the build up, the outside perspectives into his personal experience. Bought into the characters big time…….extremely hot - also one of my favorite things with well written erotica - I was in the room, right there. Watching the whole thing play out.
This chapter was honestly insanely intense, especially with how much tension and vulnerability Marcus was fighting against the whole time. I really liked how Kathryn never lost that calm control over the situation because it made every interaction between them feel even sharper and more addictive to read. Did you always plan for Marcus to spiral this hard after the interview, or did that dynamic grow stronger while writing them?
Also I got an idea while reading, can we connect in DMs? I can share the idea with you there <333
Loved the dynamics in this - the writing of the build up, the outside perspectives into his personal experience. Bought into the characters big time…….extremely hot - also one of my favorite things with well written erotica - I was in the room, right there. Watching the whole thing play out.
This means so much. Thank you, friend! 🖤
Wait, are you… is this making me… do I want to… damn it, Sloane!
This was amazing I really love the obedience
This chapter was honestly insanely intense, especially with how much tension and vulnerability Marcus was fighting against the whole time. I really liked how Kathryn never lost that calm control over the situation because it made every interaction between them feel even sharper and more addictive to read. Did you always plan for Marcus to spiral this hard after the interview, or did that dynamic grow stronger while writing them?
Also I got an idea while reading, can we connect in DMs? I can share the idea with you there <333